First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a girl from China. I am 17 years old, and i am preparing for college. I want to study in an English-speaking school, so i will join in you. I am an active girl but i am sometimes a little shy. I hope to make friends with you.

This kind of punctuation ,.:;!?   always has a space after it, but no space before. You have made a great start, I would love to help you choose and get into a good school :)

don't worry!! you are at right site. you can make here many language friend,  with home you  can learn and practice ur english.