Corrections · 8
(Part One)
Microplastics
Recently,
I started to notice the issue (1) emergence of
microplastics in the environment. Microplastics refers to is the small
plastic particles which is (2) are smaller
than 5mm across.
Because the microplastics is are (3) so
small, organisms (4) ingest eat them
accidentally. The (5) Scientists had (6) have found
microplastics in oyster and fish guts. Last week, I read (7) a piece of news claiming that the microplastics
is even found in (8) human
feces. (9) This is
really awful ! I don't want plastics in my belly!
I tried not to
use using plastics
in everyday life, but it is was too
difficult — When I go shopping in the supermarket, everything is was wrapped
in plastics: no matter fish,
meat, vegetable, even eggs and noodles....everything!
What can we do?
(Part Two)
Hi
Fangling,
Thank you
for sharing this. I think plastics is really a scary invention.
Just some
suggestions for your writing:
(1) We can
use the word "emergence" to describe something that comes into
existence, but was not known to exist before.
(2) "particles" is a plural noun and should be paired with "are", a plural verb.
(3) If we consider "microplastic" as a substance, it is uncountable. When we use "microplastics", we are considering the different types of microplastic, and it becomes countable. Microplastics are (correct) / Microplastics is (incorrect as you are referring to more than one type)
(Part Three)
(4)
We "eat" when we taste and chew our food before swallowing it into
our gullet. I used "ingest" instead to describe organisms who take
their food by simply swallowing it.
(5) Here,
you are stating a claim or a truth. Therefore, you are not referring to a
specific group of scientists, and do not need the definite article (the).
Examples:
The plants need light to photosynthesise. --> you are referring specifically to some plants you have. / Plants need light to photosynthesise.--> you are referring to all plants in general.
(Part Four)
(6)
Scientists made their discovery in the past, but the discovery is still
relevant at the present. To express this meaning, we use the present perfect
tense (have found).
(7)
"News" is an uncountable noun even though
it ends with the letter "s". We can, however, add a unit of measure before
an uncountable noun and pluralise it. Example: two pieces of news (correct) / two news (wrong) / a news (wrong)
(8) The apostrophe s ('s) is unnecessary as we can use "human" as an attributive adjective to describe the noun "feces". Some examples: Train station. Although "Train" is a noun, it acts as an attributive adjective in this case to describe the type of "station". We do not write "train's station". / Lemon juice. Although "Lemon" is a noun, it acts as an attributive adjective in this case to describe the type of "juice". We do not write "lemon's juice".
(9) We
use "this" to refer to a specific thing just mentioned. (e.g. We are
discussing about our budget, and I have a feeling this will take a long time.)
We use "that" to refer to a specific thing mentioned some time ago
(in the past).
Scientists had found microplastics in oyster and fish guts. Last week, I read that microplastics are even found in human feces. That is really awful! I don't want plastics in my belly!!!
I tried not to use plastics in everyday life, but it is too difficult~ When I go shopping at the supermarket, everything was wrapped in it, no matter what it was; fish, meat, vegetables, even eggs and noodles....everything!!
What can we do?
*I think you did a great job!! try not to repeat the same words so many times through out the text!*
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