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The Gardening I am used to spending summer in my country house with my two children. This house is not so comfortable as my flat in a city, but I am ready to sacrifice comfort for other advantages. For example, we can get fresh air, spend all day outside, eat farmer's meat, milk and eggs. I have not got any animals, but we buy these products from neighbors. My children do many sports activities like riding a bicycle, a scooter and a skateboard, playing with a ball and playing badminton. When it comes to me, I am fond of gardening. I have not got "green fingers", like my mom, but I enjoy working with plants. I grow different vegetables, such as potatoes, pumpkins, tomatoes, cucumbers, corn and zucchinis. I like to eat apples, pears and plums from a tree. I believe, that my fruits and vegetables are much more ecological then ones, that we can buy in a supermarket, since I do not use chemical fertilizers. I also like picking berries and mushrooms in a forest near my house. In evenings I fancy sitting with a good book on a swing in my garden and smell flowers. It is so relaxing!

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The Gardening

I am used to spending summer at my country house with my two children. This house is not as comfortable as my flat in the city, but I am ready to sacrifice comfort for other advantages. For example, we have fresh air, we spend all day outside, and we eat farmer's meat, milk, and eggs. I don't have any animals, but we buy these products from neighbors. My children enjoy many sports activities like riding a bicycle, a scooter, and a skateboard, playing with a ball and playing badminton.

As for me, I am fond of gardening. I don't have a "green thumb", like my mom, but I enjoy working with plants. I grow different vegetables, such as potatoes, pumpkins, tomatoes, cucumbers, corn, and zucchinis. I like to eat apples, pears, and plums from a tree. I believe, that my fruits and vegetables are much healthier than what we can buy in a supermarket, since I do not use chemical fertilizers.

I also like picking berries and mushrooms in a forest near my house. In the evenings I fancy/enjoy sitting with a good book on a swing in my garden, smelling the flowers. It is so relaxing!

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The Gardening

This house is not as comfortable as my flat

I don't have a green thumb.

I believe that my fruits and vegetables are much more ecological than the ones that we can buy in a supermarket, since I do not use chemical fertilizers.

more... than (а не then)

без запятых перед "that" (2 раза)

In evenings I fancy sitting with a good book on a swing in my garden and smelling flowers.

Используют fancy как глагол в британском диалекте, но если по-американскому, то будет лучше "I enjoy sitting..."

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