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One day I was at my friends house working on my project and when we finished I had to go home and so I went to take the bus with my other friend but none of us knew how to get around Tunja, so we took a bus and we thought it was the right one but then we noticed that it was going out of the city and we got scared because we didn’t know where we were going, then we asked the driver and he told us that it was going to a town outside of tunja and we laughed about it so we had to get down and get another bus
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[This entire paragraph is written as one long sentence. We call these types of sentences "run-on" because they go on and on without stopping. Run-on sentences are very difficult for a reader to follow. You should break up long sentences into shorter ones. I have done that here with yours.]
One day I was at my friends house working on my project and when we finished I had to go home. So I went to take the bus with my other friend but none of us knew how to get around Tunja, so we took a bus and we thought it was the right one but then we noticed that it was going out of the city. We got scared because we didn’t know where we were going. Then we asked the driver and he told us that it was going to a town outside of Tunja and we laughed about it, so we had to get down and get another bus.Want to progress faster?
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