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First time in iTalki This is my first time in iTalki. I have 39 years old, i have a wife and a daughter. I am live in Brazil. I want learn english to work in other country, prospect news experiences. I read and listen english, but my write is poor. I will write more in the book. Please tell me anything about this little text. I don't use translate. Thank you everybody.

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First time in iTalki

This is my first time on iTalki. I am 39 years old, I have a wife and a daughter. I am live in Brazil. I want to learn english to work in another country, prospect news experiences. I read and understand english, but my writing is poor. I will write more in the book. Please tell me anything about this little text. I don't use translate. Thank you everybody.


1. Visiting a website is "ON".  I was on CNN.com or I was shopping ON Amazon.com.

2. In english we ARE and age, we don't HAVE an age.  :-)

3. I want TO learn.  (Eu quero aprender - is same in portuguese) 

4. prospect news experiences.  I don't understand this phrase.  Maybe you mean "to have new experiences" ?  NEWS is not the plural of new.  In english, adjectives are not plural just because the noun is plural. 

5. I don't use translate.  Here you would say: "I didn't use Google Translate"  or "I try to not use translation sites" or something like that.  


 


 

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First time in iTalki

This is my first time on iTalki. I am 39 years old. I have a wife and a daughter. I live in Brazil. I want to learn English to work in another country. I read English books and I listen to English (songs, news, conversations, etc..) , but my writing is very weak. I will write more in the book. Please tell me anything about this little text. I did not use a translator. Thank you everybody.


Hello!! 

You did pretty well on this. However, I made small changes regarding the grammar part that you need to take into consideration for later use. 

Keep it up and I am sure you will master the English language in no time!! 


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I want to learn English to work in other countries and discover news experiences.

I can understand written and spoken English, but my [own] writing skills are poor.

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First time on iTalki

This is my first time in on iTalki. I have am 39 years old, i I have a wife and a daughter. I am live in Brazil. I want to learn English to work in another country as I want new experiences. I can read and listen in english, but my writeing is poor. I will write more in the book (1). Please tell me anything I can improve in this about this little text. I didn't use a translator. Thank you everybody.

(1) What book are you referring to? You could say: "I will write more in my notebook to improve it" (referring to your previous sentence of: "but my writing is poor")

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