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Could you help me to correct this? Once upon time, in a faraway kingdom, a beautiful queen who was loved by her people and whose beauty and nobility were incomparable. The queen had three dragons that were a gift of one family friend when her parents died. She was called mother of dragons. With the time, the dragons grew up and they became more dangerous and uncontrollable. One day, the biggest dragon escaped from the castle and attacked the nearest village. The dragon had the strength of one thousand men and it spat fire many meters away. One hundred of soldiers tried to stop it, but were burned and eaten one by one. People were horrified, the queen had become in the most hated queen had ever existed. People furious, demanded to the queen kill the dragons to avoid other attack. The queen was very sad because she loved her people, but the dragons were the only family she had ever known. Determined to find a solution, she decided to offer her hand and all her kingdom to that knight who find a way to stop the dragon without damage it. Not many knights had tried stop the dragon, because they know how furious was it. However, in the village, one young plebeian was willing to help to the queen. He was Jon Snow who was a poor orphan that worked as a farmer. He known there was just one powerful weapon could stop furious beast and he know where she had to go.

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Once upon time, in a faraway kingdom, there lived a beautiful queen who was loved by her people and whose beauty and nobility were incomparable. The queen had three dragons that were had been a gift of one from a family friend when her parents died. She was called mother of dragons.
With the time, the dragons grew up and they became more dangerous and uncontrollable. One day, the biggest dragon escaped from the castle and attacked the nearest village. The dragon had the strength of one thousand men and it could spit spat fire over many meters away. One A hundred of the soldiers tried to stop it, but they were burned and eaten one by one.
People were horrified, the queen had become in the most hated queen that had ever existed. People Furious, people demanded to that the queen kill the dragons to avoid other attack. The queen was very sad because she loved her people, but the dragons were the only family she had ever known. Determined to find a solution, she decided to offer her hand and all her kingdom to that any knight who could find a way to stop the dragon without damage harming it.
Not many knights had tried stop the dragon, because they know knew how furious dangerous it was it. However, in the village, one young plebeian peasant was willing to help to the queen. He was Jon Snow who was a poor orphan that worked as a farmer. He knownknew there was just one powerful weapon that could stop the furious beast and he know knew where she had to go.
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Once upon time, in a faraway kingdom, a beautiful queen who was loved by her people and whose beauty and nobility were incomparable. The queen had three dragons that were a gift of  by one family friend of the family when her parents died. She was called mother of dragons.
With the time, the dragons grew up and they became more dangerous and uncontrollable. One day, the biggest dragon escaped from the castle and attacked the nearest village. The dragon had the strength of one thousand men and it spat  set fire many meters away. One hundred of soldiers tried to stop it, but were burned and eaten, one by one.
People were horrified, the queen had become in the most hated queen who had ever existed. The People, furious, demanded to the queen killed the dragons to avoid another attack. The queen was very sad because she loved her people, but the dragons were the only family she had ever known. Determined to find a solution, she decided to offer her hand and all her kingdom to that knight who find found a way to stop the dragon without damaging it.
Not many knights had tried and stop the dragon, because they know knew how furious was it was . However, in the village, one young plebeian was willing to help to the queen. He was Jon Snow who was a poor orphan that worked as a farmer. He known knew there was just one powerful weapon that could stop the furious beast and he know knew where she (or he? Who's gonna find the weapon?) had to go.

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