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please correct my entry... i have to fill a form... urgent i want to be a leader rather than a manager,who manages the rules that are set by leader.when i was in my high school,i have a dream to become an effective businessman.my second choice was to join Pakistan army and to serve nation.now i have realized that army is not only option to serve the nation.you can serve the nation in different ways.i was a active member of sport society in my school. i also selected as a football team caption in my college.In university, i join debate society as a public speaker.i am very interested in team work. i am basically from Lahore.it was very easy for me to take admission in a university in Lahore.NTU Faisalabad was also an option for me.but i moved to Karachi''city of lights''.i know that karachi acts as a backbone for industries.Most textile and other industries located here.As we know that textile industry need revolution.we need to work on our import and export activities.we need engineers''effective engineers''. i know that U.S.A is working on mechatronics,space and other technologies rather than textile.But they have a sense of business management.they know how to run business effectively and to obtain output.Americans are top on business management.they focus more on business rather than a job.I want to be a good businessman,especially i want our textile industry to rise again.i hope after some years,Pakistan will get no.1 in ranking of textile exporters.

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the correction button went strange, so this is the clean version I want to be a leader rather than a manager,- who manages the rules that are set by the leader. When I was in high school, I had a dream to become an effective businessman. My second choice was to join the Pakistani army and to serve my nation. Now I realized that joining the army is not the only option to serve my nation. You can serve your nation in many different ways. I was an active member of the sports society in my school. I was also selected as the football team captain in my college. During my university years, I joined the debate society as a public speaker. I am very interested in teamwork. I am basically a Lahore native. Gaining admission to a Lahorian university would be a piece of cake for me. I was also considering NTU Faisalabad was also an option for me. However, I moved to Karachi, the ''city of lights''. I know that Karachi is the industrial backbone of India. Most textile and other industries are located here. As we know that the textile industry needs revolution., we need to work on our import and export activities. We need ''effective engineers''. I am aware that the U.S is working on mechatronics, spatial, and other technologies rather than textile. However, I notice that most Americans have a sense of business management. They know how to run a business effectively and how to generate results. Americans are great on business management. They focus more on running the business rather than see their work merely as a job. I would like to be a good businessman. My dream is to see our textile industry to rise again. I hope Pakistan can be a second to none textile exporter in a few years.
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