The Babies’ Entertainments
They say, that if you want to develop intelligence of your child, it is necessary to provide him sufficient amount of new impressions every day. That is why I try to not only play games and read books with my son but also find interesting places to visit with him.
For example, last week we went to a swimming pool, attended a dogs and cats show and a classical concert for babies.
I should say that my son is only 2 years old; therefore sometimes it is difficult to find an appropriate entertainment for such a small baby. Fortunately, there are several projects created for little children and their parents in our city.
First of all, it is a swimming pool. Although it was our first visit, I am going to keep training there. There was a group of five mothers with their children. We did exercises. A trainer told me, that after a year my son will be able to swim on his own. I am sure, that swimming is a good sport for children, that helps them to get a perfect posture and develop their muscular system.
When it comes to the classical music concert, it is another interesting project. The organizer created a series of concerts for babies by the name of “The Baby Concert”. Children could not only listen to live music but also move, crawl, dance. The host told a little story about each composition, gave suitable toys (like little birds, bells, paper leaves and so on) and suggested games. After the concert children had the opportunity to play such musical instruments like a piano, a violin, a cello. The both of us (my son and I) really enjoyed this concert.
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The Babies’ Entertainments
They say, that if you want to develop the intelligence of your child, it is necessary to provide him [with] a sufficient amount of new impressions every day. That is why I try to not only to play games and read books with my son but also find interesting places to visit with him.For example, last week we went to a swimming pool, attended a dogs and cats show and a classical concert for babies.
I should say that my son is only 2 years old, therefore sometimes it is difficult to find an appropriate entertainment for such a small baby. Fortunately, there are several projects created for little children and their parents in our city.
First of all, there* is a swimming pool. Although it was our first visit, I am going to keep training there. There was a group of five mothers with their children. We did exercises. A trainer told me that after a year my son will be able to swim on his own. I am sure that swimming is a good sport for children that helps them to get a perfect posture and develop their muscular system.**
When it comes to the classical music concert, it is another interesting project. The organizer created a series of concerts for babies by the name of “The Baby Concert”. Children could not only listen to live music but also move, crawl, and*** dance. The host told a little story about each composition, gave suitable toys (like little birds, bells, paper leaves, and so on) and suggested games. After the concert children had the opportunity to play such musical instruments like a piano, a violin, and*** a cello. The both of us (my son and I) really enjoyed this concert.
[* This is the first time you mention a swimming pool, so you can't use "it" to refer to it until after this point in the text.
** Commas are used to separate phrases or to indicate a short pause in speech. I have removed some commas where it would not be natural to pause while speaking the words.
*** When you have a list of items, you need to have an "and" before the final one.]
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