A Little Trip to HsinChu

Because (2) We are / Both of us are all prone to motion sickness, have carsick so we ate a took some medication to prevent motion sickness; however, medicine it makes made us feel drowsy. tired We fell asleep (2) every time when we were on the a train or bus. we all in sleep quickly

HsinChu is a slowly slow-paced city. We really like the city here and the seafood there is fresh, delicious and cheap. I think we will go there visit Hsinchu again at soon.

Hi Carol,

I have been there and I like the place too. 

Just some suggestions for your writing:

(1) We use a comma (,) to separate an introductory phrase (e.g. With this in mind, / Having said that, / On the other hand, ) or introductory adverb (e.g. Yesterday) from the rest of the sentence. 

(2) You mentioned "with my mate" which means that there are only two of you. Therefore, using "We are" or "Both of us" is more appropriate. "all" gives the impression of more than two.

(3) Although "everytime" is now very common in written English, it is actually two separate words (every time). 

I hope this helps. 

A Little Trip to HsinChu

Because we all get carsick, so we took some motion sickness medicine. It makes us sleepy , and everytime when we are on the train or bus we all fall  asleep quickly.

HsinChu is a slowly city. We really like it there and the seafood here is fresh, delicious and cheap. I think we will go there again at soon.

Using 'all' reads like more than two people, but you already told us you only went with one person.

Both - two people.

All - more than two people.

Sounds like you had a great time!