Memories 02
would you please correct my sentences?
Hello!
This is my second Daily Memories;
I was not sure about writing english memories tonighat hours age but I'm writing now.
today i have a regular working day, I started work almost one and half hours others when our boss called me that we have some problem at the compressor no 1601A and please come here and look at its situation. I waked up and went to refinery site and saw that it didn't work properly, the second stage pressure was rising and there was some bad noises in suction valves. the vavles were getting hot more than usuall than i realize that there were some trouble on them. I said that operators change turn off the compressore and start the spare. after that i went to the resturant for breakfast. i told my personal that open the valves and check them first. after the problem i reply two letters for our critical project that took time more that usuall. after that i called our procument boss for buying two bearing request faster because we need them urgently. he complained that you wrote a letter before and critisize us for buying fake bearings. i explained the letter concept for him and he accept the explaines!! i answer some inquiries after that and the day went ahead like other days...
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Memories 02 would you please correct my sentences?
Hello!This is my second Daily Memories;
I was not sure about writing English memories tonight hours ago but I'm writing now.
Today I had a regular working day, I started work almost one and half hours others when our boss called me to say that we have some problem at the compressor no 1601A and please come here and look at its situation. I woke up and went to the refinery site and saw that it didn't work properly, the second stage pressure was rising and there were some bad noises in suction valves. the valves were getting hotter than usual. Then I realized that there was some trouble with them. I told the operators to turn off the compressor and start the spare. After that I went to the resturant for breakfast. I told my personnel/personal assistant?? to open the valves and check them first. After the problem I replied to two letters for our critical project. That took more time than usuall. After that I called our procurement boss about buying two bearings faster because we need them urgently. He complained that "you wrote a letter before" and criticised us for buying fake bearings. I explained the letter concept for him and he accepted the explanation!! I answered some inquiries after that and the day went ahead like other days...
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