mosh 3arfah, yemken 

sabahu alkhayr,

ana mabsoota, ureeduu ( Ored )  an yetakallem ( you should say Ataklam ) { because you are talking about yourself } -  al´arabiyyah, wallahi.  
ana abhatho an mudarri@. .. what is mudarri ?

ana baheb amr diab, ana ohebu an oghany hul ( kul )  alaghaney ( Al aghany ) 
Ana baheb el raas el sharky.


matha t’ateqidan ? ( ... better to say ( t'ataqidon) = because you are talking to a group of people ) .. (la ba´s) 

ashoufak orayeb  = same here you u wrote ( ashoufak orayeb ) for talking to a single person while better to write  (ashoufkom orayeb ) because you are talking / writing to a group of people .

your wriitng is really good =) well done and good luck .