One short topic. This is my first one in English Comune 13. This place is used to be one of the dangerous places in Medellin and in Colombia in generally. Since 1990 till 2007 no one didn't want to ta

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One short topic. This is my first one in English Comune 13. This place is used to be one of the dangerous places in Medellin and in Colombia in generally. Since 1990 till 2007 no one didn't want to take a response for this place or make one decision that could help and stop it. Criminality, narcos, killings and the war with the Escobar narco cartel. The same time it was the civil war in Colombia. It' changing. The woman which have been living in that comune told us lots of stories about her local life. She is conducts tours For now, this neighborhood seems is more or less calm, with people who wants to work and wants to ne useful for their city. Graffiti makes everything here so colorful. Also people created couple escalators and made easier life for local people who living far in the mountains. For sure it's not a perfect touristic place,if you want so. But this is one prove for that even in this kind of situation exists a possibility to find the way out.

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One short topic. This is my first one in English.

Commune 13. This place used to be one of the (most?) dangerous places in Medellin and in Colombia in general. From 1990 to 2007 no one wanted to take responsiblity for this place or make one decision that would help it or stop its decline.

Criminality, narcotics, killings and the war with the Escobar narco cartel reigned. At the same time Colombia was in a civil war.

Things are changing. The woman who has been living in that commune told us lots of stories about her local life. She conducts tours.

For now this neighborhood seems more or less calm, with people who want to work and want to be useful for their city. Graffiti makes everything here so colorful. Also couple escalators have been made and an easier life for people who (come to work from?) far away in the mountains.

For sure it's not a perfect touristic destination, but this is one proof for that even in this kind of situation there exists the possibility to find a way out.

Very well written!

One short topic. This is my first one in English

Comune 13. This place is used to be one of the dangerous places in Medellin and in Colombia in general. Since From 1990 till to 2007 no one didn't wanted to take a response (not sure what this means... sorry!) for this place or make one a decision that could would help and stop it.

Criminality, narcos, killings and the war with the Escobar narco cartel. Also, at the same time it there was the civil war in Colombia.

It's changing. The woman women which who have been living in that comune told us lots of stories about her local life. She is conducts tours

For now, this neighborhood seems is more or less calm, with people who wants want to work and wants want to ne be useful for to their city. Graffiti makes everything here so colorful. Also people created couple escalators (don't understand this phrase) and made easier life life easier for local people who living live far into the mountains. -"Deep in the mountains" sounds a bit better to me.

For sure it's not a perfect touristic place,if you want so. But this is one prove proof for that even in this kind of situation exists a possibility to find the way out.

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