life is beautiful
Life is Beautiful and the most beauriful thing in where parents,brothers,friends,hope.every thing at all even the calamities and problems are beautiful because it strengtens our will and our desire to succed and achieve our simple dreams.adecent life,amariage of love,wonderful children and a hapy ending between our grandchildren
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Hi Abdelhadi,,
See below for my take on the passage. It's a great message! I apologize that I decided to rewrite the passage rather than comment on yours, so this is my take on what you were trying to convey. I also apologize if the intent was off.
Life is Beautiful
Life is beautiful, where the most beautiful thing is our relationships with parents, brothers and sisters, friends, and, above all, a hope for the future to come. Even the calamities and problems life brings along are beautiful as it strengthens our will and desire to achieve our simplest dreams. A good life can be found from the following: a marriage founded by love, wonderful children, and an invested hope for a happy future for our grandchildren.
life is beautiful
Life is Beautiful and the most beauriful thing in where parents,brothers,friends,hope.every thing at all even the calamities and problems are beautiful because it strengtens our will and our desire to succed and achieve our simple dreams.adecent life,amariage of love,wonderful children and a hapy ending between our grandchildrenWant to progress faster?
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