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My job interview with CrewLink (Ryanair flight attendant) Hi guys! I'm Maria Valentina and I'm 23. I'm an Italian girl who wants to learn new english vocabulary. I need it to pass a job interview with CrewLink. Crewlink is an agency who choose flight attendants for Ryanair. I really want to become a flight attendant, so I need your help. Is there anybody who want to help me? I need it to do a good written composition. Thanks to all people who can help me. Valentina

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My Job Interview with CrewLink (Ryanair Flight Attendant)

Hi guys!
I'm Maria Valentina and I'm 23. I'm an Italian girl who wants to learn new English vocabulary. I need it to pass a job interview with CrewLink. Crewlink is an agency who that chooses [1] flight attendants for Ryanair. I really want to become a flight attendant, so I need your help. Is there anybody who wants [2] to help me? I need it to do a good written composition. [3]

Thanks to all people who can help me.
Valentina

[1] People are "who", things are "that". Also, agency is singular, so "chooses" is needed here.

[2] "Anybody" is singular.

[3] Suggested phrasing: "I need it to write a good composition."

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My job interview with CrewLink (Ryanair flight attendant)

Hi guys!
I'm Maria Valentina and I'm 23. I'm an Italian girl who wants to learn new English words. I need them to pass a job interview with CrewLink. Crewlink is an agency who choose flight attendants for Ryanair. I really want to become a flight attendant, so I need your help. Is there anybody who wants to help me? I need to write a good composition.

Thanks to all those who can help me.
Valentina.

Very well written! You are hired, not fired!

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Hi guys! I'm Maria Valentina and I'm 23. I'm an Italian girl who wants to learn new English words. I need them to pass a job interview with Crewlink. Crewling is an agency that choose flight attendants for Ryanair. I really want to become a flight attendant, so I need your help. Is there anybody who wants to help me? I need it to do a good written composition. Thanks to all those who can help me. Valentina
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