Bad behavior!
When you are interested by someone, you can do many things to get her. Let's me tell you a little story to explain what I'm saying.
When I saw her for the first time, she was the only girl who I'm interested in. I decided to speak with her and as I'm not bad if you know what I mean... that matches between us. So, I took her number and we began to get to know each other, everything was great. I did everything to make her laugh and she liked it. When she wanted that we meet, I always managed to be free. Then, what had to happen, happened. She began to love me, and me, I felt comfortable about it. ( because I already got what I wanted)
I began to be less present, I had not the time to meet her anymore, and her smile became occasional.
I when to say, why do we take time and energy to get a girl and we do not do more to keep her? That seems weird, right?
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Hi there Lorensy, I tried making some corrections to your post. The phrases in yellow are corrections, and the phrases in blue are more suggestions on what sounds more natural.
Bad behavior!
When I saw her for the first time, she was the only girl I was interested in. I decided to talk to her, and we clicked. So, I got her number and we began to get to know each other, everything was great. I did everything to make her laugh and she liked it. When she wanted to meet up, I always managed to be free. Then, what had to happen, happened. She began to love me, I felt comfortable about it. ( because I already got what I wanted)
I began to be less present, I didn't have the time to meet her anymore, and her smile became occasional.
I mean to say, why do we take time and energy to get a girl and then do not do more to keep her? That seems weird, right?
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Well, not so weird, really. When you say, "I already got what I wanted" you reveal your motive. Apparently you are more interested in a conquest than a lasting relationship. There is a big difference between the two.
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