Basketball
I prefer basketball from the most common sports. This is because I play it from school. We had a great trainer
at school. I played for my high school basketball team. I also played basketball for the national team at competitions at the institute. Unfortunately, due to my unstable schedule, I don’t regularly get to workouts. It saddens me greatly. After all, training is only 1 time per week. During the game, anything happens. Last time I pulled the ligaments on the ankle. My leg ached, but I continued to play. It was not the best solution. I was pleasantly surprised that my foot began to pass quite quickly. 4 days after the injury, the tumor was asleep and now the leg doesn’t bother much. I can not yet run, but I walk very comfortably. I hope that next week I will be able to go to the play.
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Basketball
I prefer basketball from the over other most common sports. This is because I have played it from since I was in school. We had a great trainer coach [in US English, the "trainer" in this context is usually the sports doctor] at school. I played for my high school basketball team. I also played basketball for the national team at competitions at the when I studied in institute. Unfortunately, due to my unstable irregular schedule, I don’t regularly get to go to workouts practice [https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/workout, "work out" is also a phrasal verb, but that's about general fitness and not typically about training for a sport like basketball] . It saddens me greatly. After all, training is only 1 time per week. During the game, anything can happens. Last time I pulled the ligaments on in my the ankle. My leg ached, but I continued to play. It was not the best solution decision [solution = to a problem]. I was pleasantly surprised that my foot began to pass get better quite quickly. 4 days after the injury, the tumor was asleep [I don't know what this means; maybe "the swelling went down"] and now the leg it doesn’t bother me much. I cannot yet run, but I walk very comfortably. I hope that next week I will be able to go to the play [as someone else mentioned "go to the play" means go to the theatre; "be able to go play" is fine, or "go to the game" where "game" here refers to the match].0
I was pleasantly surprised that my foot began to pass quite quickly.
This sentence is confusing. In sport, "to pass" means передать мяч (или шайбу, и т. д.) товарищу по команде
4 days after the injury, the tumor was asleep and now the leg doesn’t bother much.
Чаще всего tumor = опухоль рака. Maybe you mean something like "the swelling" ?
I hope that next week I will be able to go to the play.
= Надеюсь, что следующую неделю смогу идти смотреть пьесу (в театре)
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Basketball
Among the most common sports, I prefer basketball . This is because I played it from at school. We had a great trainer at school. I played for my high school basketball team. I also played basketball for the national team at competitions at the institute. Unfortunately, due to my unstable schedule, I don’t regularly get to workouts. It saddens me greatly. After all, training is only 1 time per week. During the game, anything can happens. Last time I pulled the ligaments on the my ankle. My leg ached, but I continued to play. It was not the best solution. I was pleasantly surprised that my foot began to pass heal quite quickly. 4 days after the injury, the tumor was asleep, and now the leg doesn’t bother me much. I can not yet run, but I walk very comfortably. I hope that next week I will be able to go to the play. [or: I will be able to go to the game.][What you wrote is quite good overall, but the first sentence was a little bit awkward sounding. I could easily understand most everything you wrote however. Also, although it is common these days for people to use digits in sentences like 1,2,3,4..., it is more proper in written English to spell out the digits, especially when they are at the start of a sentence: 'After all, training is only one time per week.' and 'Four days after the injury, ... I am not sure what you meant above when you wrote 'the tumor was asleep', as you were talking about a ligament injury in your ankle. Did you mean to say something like 'the swelling had gone down'?
Nice job overall though! :-) ]
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