STORY ON A FLIGHT(correct it please)
It was eleven o'clock at night when the telephone rang. It was the travel agent. She said that our flight had changed the hour to leave. Instead of leave at 9 o’clock we have to leave at 7. At that moment we got angry because it was very late to inform us that the flight had changed.
Next day, it was raining and we were a little bit scared for the flight. When we arrived to the airport, before we can get on the plane we had to show the boarding pass. A couple of minutes later, we were inside the plane because we hadn’t to queue. We took off easily but the problems started after. They were lots turbulences and the flight attendant told us to get the seat belt.
My mum told me to calm down but I couldn’t. We had such terrible weather that it was impossible to don’t have any turbulence on the trip. I was so nervous that I started to cry. My mum, however, is very well-balanced and rather than be nervous because of this situation she was emotionally stable and laid-back. The turbulences finished in 10 minutes but it was the largest minutes of my life. Finally we arrived well to London.
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STORY ON A FLIGHT(correct it please)
It was eleven o'clock at night when the telephone rang. It was the travel agent. She said that the departure time for our flight had changed. Instead of leaving at 9 o’clock we have to leave at 7. At that moment we got angry because it was very late to inform us that the flight had changed.The next day, it was raining and we were a little bit scared for the flight. When we arrived at the airport, we had to show the boarding pass before we could get on the plane. A couple of minutes later, we were inside the plane because we didn't need to queue. We took off easily but the problems started after. They were lots of turbulences and the flight attendant told us to wear our seat belt.
My mum told me to calm down but I couldn’t. We had such terrible weather that it was impossible to not have any turbulence on the trip. I was so nervous that I started to cry. My mum, however, is very well-balanced and, rather than be nervous because of this situation, she was emotionally stable and laid-back. The turbulences finished 10 minutes later, but they were the longest minutes of my life. Finally we arrived safely in London.
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STORY ON A FLIGHT(correct it please)
It was eleven o'clock at night when the telephone rang. It was the travel agent who She said that our flight time had changed the hour to leave. Instead of leaving at 9 o’clock, we would be departing have to leave at 7. At that moment We got We were angry because they had informed us very late it was very late to inform us that the flight had changed.The next day, it was raining and we were a little bit scared about the flight. When we arrived at the airport and before we could board get on the plane, we had to show our boarding passes. A couple of minutes later, we were inside the plane because we hadn’t had to queue. We took off easily, but then the problems began. There was lots of turbulence and the flight attendant told us to fasten our get the seat belts.
My mum told me to calm down but I couldn’t. We had such terrible weather that turbulence on our flight was inevitable. it was impossible to don’t have any turbulence on the trip I was so nervous that I started to cry. My mum, however, is very laid back, well-balanced and rather than being nervous, because of this situation she was reassuringly calm emotionally stable and laid-back. The turbulence was over in 10 minutes but it was the largest longest 10 minutes of my life. Finally, we arrived safely in well to London.
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