Pet X
I have a friend Kate and she is really passionate about animal rights. Last time I visited her she lived with a dog X - half poodle half mongrel, in her flat. I'm a cat lover but missed my friend and wanted to spend some time with Kate. Since my first time in that place, it briefly slipped my mind as to why I was skeptical about dogs living inside the house. Below I want to note why dogs should to live outside.
Firstly, the flat began to smell and hairs were lying around. After one night I could smell that awful odor and dog hair was everywhere - on my body, on my clothes, in the air. If the owner doesn't care about their dog, why do you keep him?
Secondly, they are time-consuming and needy. Taking care of another living being obligates the owner to hard work and thorough training. Dog X was prone to go to the toilet, not in the litter tray but at the middle of the room what cause my great disturbing.
I don't have anything against dogs. I have been struck by this situation.
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Pet X
I have a friend Kate and she is really passionate about animal rights. Last time I visited her she lived with a dog X - half poodle half mongrel, in her flat. I'm a cat lover but missed my friend and wanted to spend some time with Kate. Since the my first time of my presence in that place, it briefly slipped my mind as to why I was skeptical about dogs living inside the house. Below I want to note why dogs should to live outside.Firstly, the flat began to smell and hairs were lying around. After one night I felt that awful smell could smell that awful odor and dog's hairs were dog hair was everywhere - on my body, on my clothes, in the air. If the owner doesn't care about their dog (1), why do you keep him?
Secondly, they are time-consuming and needy. Taking care of another living being obliges obligates the holder owner to hard work and thorough training. Dog X was prone to go to the toilet, not in the litter tray but at the middle of the room what cause my great disturbing.
I don't have anything against dogs. I have been struck (Not sure what you mean by "struck" here - maybe consider another verb) by this situation.
Good job. I agree with you in general. Although I prefer dogs over cats. As to whether the dog lives inside/outside, I think it depends on the size of the dog and also how often the owner is able to take the dog for walks. I once had a large dog (golden retriever) and he lived with me in my apartment for a while. But then he eventually moved to my parents since they have an isolated house with sufficient land for him to run freely outside. Other comments below.
(1) Maybe you mean "take care of?" As in cleaning the dog regularly? I think that would be more fitting than "doesn't care about their dog." A lot of dogs actually like smelling bad (maybe an instinct to "blend in" with the smells of natures, to avoid predators and sneak up on prey? Although if the pet doesn't have access to a water source for "natural bathing" then perhaps intervention is needed by the owner.
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