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The end of the beef bowl restaurant. Yesterday, the original beef bowl restaurant chain called Yoshinoya's first restaurant that is inside the fish market in Tukiji, Tokyo ends its business, the very last customer was served by the chairman and the received the memorial bowl, though I live in Tokyo but have never been there... I wish I would've been there.

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The end of the beef bowl restaurant.

Yesterday, the original beef bowl restaurant chain called "Yoshinoya's" ended/closed it first restaurant, that is inside the fish market in Tukiji, Tokyo. The very last customer was served by the chairman and they received the memorial bowl, though I live in Tokyo I have never been there... I wish I would've/could've been there.

(you can use would have or could have) in this sentence. 

ended or closed or ceased trading you can use any of these. 

it is more natural if you put the ended/closed/ceased trading straight after the name. Then end that sentence and remove ended/close/ ceased trading from where you have it. And the sentence makes more sense. 

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Yesterday, the original beef bowl restaurant chain called Yoshinoya's closed its first restaurant that is was located inside the fish market in Tukiji, Tokyo. Yoshinoya Branch #1 ends ended its business activities after the very last customer was served by the chairman. and the last customer received the a memorial bowl. Although I live in Tokyo but I have never been ate there... I wish I would've been there on its last business day.

The first word in this story is yesterday, a moment in time in the past with no connection to the present. Therefore, the verb tense you need to use to tell this story is the past simple, not the present simple. Interesting story full of nostalgia, thank you for sharing it. I got interested and wanted to know more so I read an article in soranews24.

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The end of the beef bowl restaurant.

Yesterday, the original beef bowl restaurant chain called Yoshinoya's first restaurant that is inside the fish market in Tukiji, Tokyo ends its business. The very last customer was served by the chairman and received a memorial bowl. Although I live in Tokyo, I have never been there... I wish I could've visited.
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@Mr. Zhang / 张老师 Yes, I hope so. I'm sure they will survive in the beef bowl industry in Japan.
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@Marina Hello, Marina. According to some news on the Internet, because the fish market itself will move to Toyosu where is nearer a bay side.

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