life is worth to live it really good
God sees everything we do, so lets make him interesting to watch..
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life is worth living really well
God sees everything we do, so lets make0
Sara, I would like to draw your attention, among other things, to the below grammatical mistakes:-
1. God see (not God sees) as in "God bless you" , "God bless America" & etc...
2. It is "Him" not "him".
1. God see (not God sees) as in "God bless you" , "God bless America" & etc...
2. It is "Him" not "him".
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