The Power of the Television   [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

The TV is a good device because it allows connecting people between themselves. For many people, it’s like a companion. It’s a good means to fight the loneliness. But, the use of it is not controlled and many viewers become an addict.

But, as for me, the main issue is that the viewers are passive: they don’t participate in the broadcast and often they all like the same things. Moreover, the content is very poor, especially on the main channel.

It is true that you can access a diversity of programs: but more often, the better programs are not broadcasted on prime time. And often, If you want to watch a good program, you* need to pay or support a lot of advertising.

Moreover, exposure to the screen is not good for the brain, especially when you're a child: it may delay our brain development. Many studies have shown that the screen has a bad effect on sleeping. Eventually, many people are tired because they passed too much time in front of their TV before sleeping.

Furthermore, the TV takes all your spare time: we don't use this time to do something else, like reading. It’s a big pity. It doesn't develop your critical thinking.

Finally, I would like to say that TV is a media who helps many companies to control the people. Actually, TV is the perfect support for advertising: the broadcasting is global and the viewers are loyal.

[* Don't move from "if you want" to "we need". These words need to be consistent. To use "we need" write: "if we want ... we need to ..."]