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Last summer holiday My last summer Holiday it is very fun.i goes to Dubai with my family I had a lot of fun because I went to many places in Dubai. I goes to Atlantis Dubai I sat there 3 night there it was amazing place . Then I goes to Dubai safari it is very cool . I see many Animals I love it . I had a lot of fun there . In other day I goes to Dubai mall I do some shopping there I buy many thing I want then I goes to burj Khalifa . I saw Great views it was amazing . Finally this is my last summer Holidays .

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Summer Holiday

My holiday last summer was very fun. I went to Dubai with my family. I had a lot of fun and I went to many places there. I went to Atlantis Dubai and spent 3 nights there. It's an amazing place. Then I went to  safari. It was very cool. I saw many animals and I loved it. I had a lot of fun there. One day, I went to Dubai mall to do some shopping. I bought many things I wanted. Afterwards, I went to Burj Khalifa. It has a great view. It was amazing. 

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Last summer holiday

My last summer Holiday it is very fun.i goes to Dubai with my family I had a lot of fun because I went to many places in Dubai. I goes to Atlantis Dubai I sat there 3 night there it was amazing place . Then I goes to Dubai safari it is very cool . I see many Animals I love it . I had a lot of fun there . In other day I goes to Dubai mall I do some shopping there I buy many thing I want then I goes to burj Khalifa . I saw Great views it was amazing . Finally this is my last summer Holidays .

My last summer holiday was a lot of fun.  I went to Dubai with my family.  It was fun because I went to many places in Dubai. I went to Atlantis Dubai for three nights and it was an amazing place.  Then I went on a Dubai safari and it was cool.  I saw many animals and loved it. I had a lot of fun there.  On another day I went to the Dubai Mall to do some shopping.  I bought many things.  I also went to Burj Khalifa to see the view, it was amazing.  

That's all I have to say about my last holiday.

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This, I think, you actually wrote yourself.

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