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発表の正しい文法の復習ができませんか?/Can someone correct grammar in my speech? Thank you!! 本日は、ヤクザとメディアの関係について分析します。日本の社会と文化には、ヤクザの活動が詳(くわ)しいので、社会とヤクザの関係について分析します。社会はヤクザの見方が異(こと)なって、ヤクザ組織の習慣が特別なので、社会の見方について分析します。初めに、ヤクザの入れ墨で、社会と関係について分析します。ヤクザの一番見える特徴は入れ墨と格好ですから、メディアの見方について説明します。 ヤクザが分かるためには、少しの歴史について紹介します。ヤクザの始まりは江戸時代に始まりました。名前の意味は花札というカードゲームから来て、3枚を引いた結果は8と9と3です。この結果は無駄を意味して、社会の外にいます。この名前は社会が色々な犯罪組織(はんざいそしき)に言ったようになりました。それに、江戸時代のために、入れ墨は昔の罰のマークでした。入れ墨の方法は長くて苦(くる)しいですから、方法が全身に彫り物します。一般的な入れ墨は神々(かみがみ)や動物や昔の勇者と花々(はなばな)で付けます。社会のために、入れ墨はイメージが面白くて悪いの両方です。普通の見方は、入れ墨が犯罪(はんざい)を付けますが、ヤクザの世界には、入れ墨が尊敬(そんけい)のマークと自分の性格です。この方法が入れ墨は変われないマークと自適(じてき)な意味です。しかし、現在見方が変わっているので、入れ墨のイメージはゆっくり良く認(みと)めるそうです。 メディアとヤクザの関係が異なっています。ヤクザの格好と活動はよく知れるので、色々な見方があります。一番有名なヤクザの活動は指爪だと思います。他の有名なヤクザのメディア特徴は銭湯(せんとう)で入れ墨がないルールだと思います。しかし、色々なメディアの見方はヤクザの良い特徴を見せます。例えば、たくさんのメディアはヤクザの名誉(めいよ)の考え方と生き方に集中(しゅうちゅう)します。それに、ヤクザは社会に手伝う活動が時々できます。2011年の神戸地震(じしん)には、ヤクザは社会に食料品(しょくりょうひん)や避難所(ひなんじょ)をあげました。しかし、全部のメディアや社会の見方は良いではありません。普通のヤクザの活動は堅気(かたぎ)の人々(ひとびと)を痛(いた)めます。一番有名な悪いヤクザの活動はサラ金の仕事です。それに堅気の人々を協力(きょうりょく)しないことになっているのに、財産(ざいさん)の損害(そんがい)が起(お)こります。ライバルのヤクザ組織は時々問題を起こして、社会が苦(くる)しまれて、困られます。社会は普通の言った質問が、「ヤクザの存在(そんざい)を許(ゆる)されるべきか」って言います。 ヤクザとメディアの関係はよく詳(くわ)しいです。一番気がつく特徴は入れ墨と社会の見方です。入れ墨はたくさんの意味があって、社会は入れ墨があまり好きじゃないです。ヤクザの生き方と入れ墨の歴史や意味は興味がありますから、ヤクザとメディアの関係はいつも異(こと)なります。堅気の人々のために、ヤクザの違う生き方は面白いだと思います。

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However, the viewpoint of various media shows the good characteristics of Yakuza. For example, many media concentrate on the idea of yakuza's honor and their way of living. Because the Yakuza way of living is different from regular people’s way of living, there is interest. Besides, yakuza sometimes will help society from time to time. In the Kobe earthquake of 2011, the yakuza gave food supplies and evacuation centers to society. In other words, yakuza will sometimes do something good for society. However, not all of the viewpoints of media and society is not good. Ordinary yakuza activities will hurt regular people. The most famous bad Yakuza activity is loansharking, for example. And even though Yakuza are not supposed to interact with regular people, property damage will sometimes occur. Rival yakuza organizations also sometimes cause problems with each other, which makes society suffer and causes problems. A common question said by society is "should we be allowed to exist yakuza"? The relationship between yakuza and media is documented well. The most noticeable feature of Yakuza is the view of tattoos and society. Irezumi have many meanings, and society does not like tattoos very much. Since the history of yakuza and the history and meaning of tattoos have people have some sort of interest, the relationship between yakuza and media is always different. I think that the different ways of living yakuza are interesting for the regular people.
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English/英語の翻訳 Today, I will analyze the relationship between the media and Yakuza. In Japan, since Yakuza activities are well documented, I will also analyze the relationship with society and Yakuza. Because society’s view of Yakuza differs heavily and each and every Yakuza group has a different custom, I will analyze that relationship with society. First of all, I will analyze society’s relationship and view with Yakuza tattoos. And because the most visible feature of Yakuza is their tattoo and appearance, I will explain the media’s view on it. To understand Yakuza, I will introduce a little history. The Yakuza started in the Edo period. The meaning of the name Yakuza comes from a card game called Hanafuda, where drawing the 3 lowest cards would result in 8, 9 and 3. This result is the lowest and means useless, and also outside of society. Eventually this name started to be used for other various criminal organizations. In addition, tattoos were a mark of punishment for crimes. The tattoo process for Irezumi is long and painful, because of the full body Irezumi. In general, Irezumi is often pictures of gods, animals, folk heroes and mixed with flowers. For society, they both view it as good or bad. A common viewpoint is that tattoos have a connection to crime, but in the Yakuza world, a tattoo is a mark of respect, a mark of power and also a mark of one’s personality. The Irezumi cannot be changed and has a special meaning. However, in today’s society, the image of tattoos is slowly getting more accepted. The relationship between media and Yakuza also differs. Since the appearance and activities of Yakuza is well documented, there are many viewpoints on Yakuza. For example, I think the most famous Yakuza activity is yubitsume, or finger cutting. Other famous Yakuza characteristics in media are the rules at bathhouses that refuse entry to people with tattoos.

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