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Ramadan ‏One of the most beautiful months of Muslims is Ramadan Because it is a message to gather family and friends Ramadan is one of the five pillars of Islam .All adult Muslims must fast during Ramadan .They are not allowed to eat or drink from dawn to sunset. Some people are excused from fasting. Those people are children, old and ill people, travelers and women who expect babies. There is a special night in Ramadan .It is Lailatul Qadr .It is one of the last ten nights of Ramadan .Muslims perform special prayer in the night .After the last day of Ramadan ,there is Eid Al-Fiter .During the Eid ,children wear new clothes and receive gifts. People visit friends and relative .They thank Allah for his great blessings ‏Finally, we believe that Ramadan is the month of competition where Muslims try to devote themselves and time to Allah by doing their prayers and reading Quran. Ramadan is the month Muslims like the most

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Ramadan

‏One of the most beautiful months of for Muslims is Ramadan because it is a message to gather with family and friends
Ramadan is one of the five pillars of Islam. All adult Muslims must fast during Ramadan. They are not allowed to eat or drink from dawn to sunset. Some people are excused from fasting. Those people are children, old and ill people, travelers and women who are expecting babies. There is a special night in Ramadan. It is Lailatul Qadr. It is one of the last ten nights of Ramadan. Muslims perform a special prayer in the night. After the last day of Ramadan, there is Eid Al-Fiter. During the Eid, children wear new clothes and receive gifts. People visit friends and relatives. They thank Allah for his great blessings.
‏Finally, we believe that Ramadan is the month of competition where Muslims try to devote themselves and time to Allah by doing their prayers and reading Quran. Ramadan is the month Muslims like the most.


You write very well :) I just have to tell you about some punctuation rules. Put a space after a punctuation mark, not before.

Example:
Ramadan is special .Muslims fast during Ramadan .  <--- not correct
Ramadan is special. Muslims fast during Ramadan.   <--- correct

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