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The Mid-Autumn festival Hello everyone! Could you correct my mistakes, please? thank you in advance. Mid-autumn festival has been very special in my feeling. I remember when I was a kid. In the festival, I took part in a local Lion dancing team. We danced and convinced people to give us something they have in their's house. We danced in the yard of each house in our's village and received a lot of fruit, candy, cookie, and even money. Quite tired but we have a lot of foods and funs. I haven't taken part in the mid-autumn festival in my village for 7 years. Even though I'm living in the largest city of Vietnam and the festival here is very bustling. I still miss the festival in my village. The air at there I could not find in the somewhere else.

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The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival has been very special in my feeling. I remember when I was a kid, at the festival, I took part in a local lion dancing team. We danced and convinced people to give us something they have in their house. We danced in the yard of each house in our village and received a lot of fruits, candy, cookies, and even money. We were quite tired or It was quite tiring but we had a lot of foods and fun.

I haven't taken part in the Mid-Autumn Festival in my village for 7 years. Even though I'm living in the largest city of Vietnam and the festival here is very bustling, [<-- comma] I still miss the festival in my village. The air at there I could not find in the somewhere else.

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