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I never think about my hobbies, as you know, mostly Chinese students like me get the traditional education, we have to learn too much from 7am to 7pm, 12 hours a day for many years.
I was not a good student before university, I used to be out of classes and play vedio game, League of Legends is my favourite game.I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I had spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
That is the happiness time in my life, I memorize it but dont want to go back. I havnt played it since in university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
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I never think about my hobbies. As you may know, most Chinese students like me get a traditional education,. For many years, education is our priority. Learning starts at 7am and ends at 7pm. I was not a good student before college (college is a general term, university is used more when you are talking about a specific place. In that case you usually use the NAME of the university). I use to be out of classes and playing video games (do you mean you skipped class or that you played games in your free time?). League of Legends is my favorite game.I always played with my friends and we could play for hours without eating or resting. I think I've spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol) (Be careful of tenses here. You said "had spent" and then "I am". The tenses should be the same. You should say "have spent" and "I am" =present or "had spend" and "I was" = past - a little confusing part of the English language)
That was the happiest time in my life. I remember it (what is "it" ? - be careful with this pronoun. How do you know the reader understands what you are referring to? Maybe say something like "I remember my carefree times playing video games") but don't want to go back. I haven't (don't forget ' when using contractions) played League of Legends (it has been a long time since you mentioned this game and "it" could mean a lot of things, so use the noun instead of the pronoun here) since college. I must make sacrifices for ..... (need to finish the thought what are you making a sacrifice for? Example: I must make sacrifices in order to get score well on my exams).
sometimes, I watch matches online, and wish RNG will win the championship this year. Five (always spell out numbers less than 10 in a sentence, and if it is the first word of a sentence spell it out too) years have passed , Uzi needs a champion!
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I never think about my hobbies, as you know, mostly Chinese students like me get the traditional education, we have to learn too much from 7am to 7pm, 12 hours a day for many years.
I was not a good student before university. I used to skip classes and play video games, with League of Legends being my favourite game. I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I have spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
That is the happiest time in my life, I memorize it but dont want to go back. I haven't played it since university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
I was not a good student before university. I used to skip classes and play video games, with League of Legends being my favourite game. I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I have spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
That is the happiest time in my life, I memorize it but dont want to go back. I haven't played it since university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
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I never think about my hobbies, as you know, mostly Chinese students like me get the traditional education, we have to learn too much from 7am to 7pm, 12 hours a day for many years.
I was not a good student before university, I used tobe out of skip classes and play vedio game video games, League of Legends is was my favourite game.I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I had spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
Thatis the happiness time was the happiest time in my life, I memorize remember it but don't want to go back. I havnt haven't played it since in i started university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
I was not a good student before university, I used to
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sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
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I never think about my hobbies, as you know, mostly Chinese students like me get the traditional education, we have to learn too much from 7am to 7pm, 12 hours a day for many years.
I was not a good student before university. I used to skip classes and play video games, with League of Legends being my favourite game. I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I have spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
That is the happiest time in my life, I memorize it but dont want to go back. I haven't played it since university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
I was not a good student before university. I used to skip classes and play video games, with League of Legends being my favourite game. I always played with my friends and we could play it for a long time without eating and resting. I think I have spent more than 1000 hours on it, however, I am still a rookie (lol)
That is the happiest time in my life, I memorize it but dont want to go back. I haven't played it since university, I must give up someting before getting.
sometimes, I watch the match on line, and wish RNG can gain the championship this years. 5 years passed ,Uzi do need a champion!
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