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It is obvious for anyone that nowadays rapidly developing technology has had a great impact on almost every sphere of people's life. The way we communicate with each other, our interrelationships are those things that have been subjected to the most significant changes.
There is no doubt that the way we communicate is constantly developing taking new, modern forms. All lingual changes that take place in modern languages are not only those which connected to the natural evolutionary process but there are some directly affeсted by technology. For instance, there appeared lots of abbreviations and shortened words in many modern languages which is the result of emerged possibility to communicate via modern gadgets with tiny screens. Are there any benefits in these lingual novelties for the mankind? As I see it, there certainly are. Evidently, presence of vivid stickers, smiles or emogies in messages makes them more expressive, emotional and capacitive.
With all this, we can continuously hear complains about difficulty today's people have in attempts to make friends or find a soul mate. Saddly, it's become too familiar to feel lonely while being in a community because it seems everyone around is stuck in their social networks. Still, I believe in people, in their ability to sympathize. The most valuable things about people's relationships can never be changed dramatically and modern people’s way of communication will serve their everlasting purposes.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that communication is changing and technology affects it greatly. But hardly any novelties can change the basics of humans' relationships.
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Could you please check my essay?
It is obvious for anyone that nowadays rapidly developing technology has had a great impact on almost every sphere of people's life lives. The way we communicate with each other and our interrelationships are those things that have been subjected to the most significant changes.There is no doubt that the way we communicate is constantly developing taking new, modern forms. All lingual changes that take place in modern languages are not only those which are connected to the natural evolutionary process but , there are some directly affeсted by technology. For instance, there appeared lots of abbreviations and shortened words in many modern languages which is the result of the emerged possibility to communicate via modern gadgets with tiny screens. Are there any benefits in these lingual novelties for the mankind? As I see it, there certainly are. Evidently, the presence of vivid stickers, smiles or emogies emojis in messages makes them more expressive, emotional and capacitive.
With all this, we can continuously hear complaints about the difficulty today's people have in attempts to make friends or find a soul mate. Saddly, it's become too familiar to feel lonely while being in a community because it seems everyone around is stuck in their social networks. Still, I believe in people, in their ability to sympathize. The most valuable things about people's relationships can never be changed dramatically and modern people’s way of communication will serve their everlasting purposes.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that communication is changing and technology affects it greatly. But However, hardly any novelties can change the basics of human relationships.
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