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My Great father My role model in life is my father, I never seen a man like him in the whole universe, he have a strong opinions and decisions although he have a democracy way of thinking, he give us a wide space of freedom to make up our minds in the issues that we are concern about in our lives, he can be serious in serious things and warm affectionate all the time, he is so educated that we learn from him the important ethics and values that give us the push to keep going in life and stimulates us to give our best to the world, he demand to obey allah's rules, my father is the sunshine of our lives and keeps us going. In conclusion, we can say that family is a gift from God we should appreciate by expressing about our love and showing more respect, obedience and appreciation for each other.

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My Great father

My role model in life is my father, I have never seen a man like him in the whole universe.  He have has a strong opinions and decisions although he hasve a democratic way of thinking, he gives us a wide space of freedom to make up our minds in the issues that we are concern about in our lives, he can be serious in serious things and warm affectionate all the time, he is so educated that we learn from him the important ethics and values that give us the push us to keep going in life and stimulates us to give our best to the world, he demand to obey allah's rules, my father is the sunshine of our lives and keeps us going to develop.
In conclusion, we can say that family is a gift from God that we should appreciate it by expressing about our love and showing more respect, obedience and appreciation for to each other.

Well-done! It is very inspiring!

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so which value is more important?

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