Describe appearance
It's the most difficult topic for me, I rarely describe people.
I have friend. Her name is Lena. She is attractive. She has long curly brown hair. She is normal height. (not tall and not small) She has green eyes. She is slender, but she always says that she wants to lose 5 kg.
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Your writing is good and easy to understand. A small suggestion is that you could make the sentences a bit longer, something like this...
Describe appearance
It's the most difficult topic for me and I rarely describe people.I have a friend. Her name is Lena. She is attractive with long curly brown hair and green eyes. She is normal height, being neither tall nor short. She is slender, but she always says that she wants to lose 5 kg.
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Describe appearance
It's the most difficult topic for me, I rarely describe people.I have a friend. Her name is Lena. She is attractive. She has long curly brown hair. She is normal average height. (neither tall and not nor small) She has green eyes. She is slender, but she always says that she wants to lose 5 kg.
(In English, we normally say, "someone is average height", not "someone is normal height".)
neither + adjective/noun nor +adjective/noun e.g. The car is neither big nor blue. The man is neither fat nor thin.
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Describe appearance
It's the most difficult topic for me, I rarely describe people.I have friend. Her name is Lena. She is attractive. She has long curly brown hair. She is normal height. (not tall and not small). She has green eyes. She is slender, but she always says that she wants to lose 5 kg.
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Nothing major to correct here Tatiana. Good work.
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