my dad
Hi,my name is Ngoc,I'm 17 years old.I live in Vinh city with my family.My family have four people: daddy,mommy,my older sister and me.Daddy is the person I respect the most.He's 52 years old and kind,generous,creative,hard working...in general,he is a good man.He's good looking too,short black hair,hight straight nose,brow eyes,square face...and he's very tall.My daddy is a bank clerk,he work in a BIDV bank.In particular,daddy play sport very well,he can play almost sport as play volleyball,football,badminton and so on.Because his job related to economic so he enjoys reading newspaper.Besides,he like to drink coffee,take care of children,listen to music and cooking.Daddy is the person cooking the best in my family,he can cooks everything what I want.He very pampered,loving me and I love my dad very much!
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My Dad
Hi, my name is Ngoc. I'm 17 years old. I live in Vinh city with my family. My family have has four people: daddy my dad, mommy my mom, my older sister and me. Daddy My dad is the person I respect the most. He's 52 years old and kind, generous, creative, hard working...in general, he is a good man. He's good looking too, short black hair, hight (high) straight nose, brown eyes, square face...and he's very tall. My daddy dad is a bank clerk, he works in a at BIDV bank.In particular,daddy my dad plays sports very well. He can play almost any sport such as play volleyball, football, badminton and so on. Because his job is related (you could also say "relates" instead of "is) to economics so he enjoys reading the newspaper. Besides Additionally, he likes to drink coffee, take care of children, listen to music and cooking. Daddy My dad is the person cooking cooks the best in my family, he can cooks everything what anything that I want. He is very pampered pampering and loving to me and I love my dad very much!Note your use of "daddy" and "mommy" are correct, however these terms only used by young children. When talking to your siblings or your mother you can say "dad" but when talking to people outside your family you should say "my dad".
"Pampering" is correct but it sounds strange to say a father pampers his teenage son.
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my dad
Hi. My name is Ngoc. I'm 17 years old. I live in Vinh City with my family. My family have has four people: daddy, mommy, my older sister and me. Daddy is the person I respect the most. He's 52 years old and kind, generous, creative, and hard-working. In general, he is a good man. He's good-looking too, with short black hair, a hight straight nose, brown eyes, a square face and he's very tall. My daddy is a bank clerk. He works in a BIDV bank. In particular, Daddy plays sports very well, He can play almost any sport as play like volleyball, football, badminton and so on. Because his job is related to economics, so he enjoys reading the newspaper. Besides that ,he likes to drink coffee, take care of his children, listen to music, and cooking. Daddy is the person cooking who cooks the best in my family. He can cooks everything that I want. He very pampered pampering, loving me and I love my dad very much!You can certainly use "daddy" but it's generally used by very young children. Most teenagers would use "father".
I capitalized the word because it's used almost like a formal title. Dad plays sports. However, when we use possessives, it's more like a description. My daddy cooks.
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