Lost and cry
Today I got lost. I hadn't found bus stop when I had qone out subway. I was crying . I cried too much last time. I don't like this but can't doing nothing . Tommorow my mother-in-law and farther-in-low will arrive. I don't see them. Maybe I'm depressed .
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Lost and Crying
Today I got lost. I hadn't found the bus stop when I had gone out of [1] the subway. I was crying. I cried too much (the) last time. I don't like this but can't doing nothing anything about it. [2] Tomorrow, my mother-in-law and father-in-law [3] will arrive. I don't won't (be able to) see them. [4] Maybe I'm depressed (about it).[1] Better: "exited" or "got off" the subway.
[2] Or: "I can't help it."
[3] Since it's both, you can also just say "my in-laws."
[4] "I don't see" them indicates that you cannot physically see them, as is the case with blindness.
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