About my job
I am 18 years old student, so I can not have full-time job. About a half year ago I decided to become tutor, so now I help other students, who are studying in school. My major is applied mathematics, because of it I help my students with understanding mathematical concepts. I think I do it well and I can see the result of my efforts: they impoved their marks in school. I love my occupation, cause I see that it makes sense. It is the most powerful and enjoable feeling that you can help someone.
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About My Job
I am a 18-year-old student, so I cannot have full-time job. About a half a year ago, I decided to become a tutor, so now I help other students who are studying in school. My major is applied mathematics, because of it and I can help my students with to understanding mathematical concepts because of my studies. I think I do it tutor my students well and I can see the result of my efforts: they impoved their marks have improved in school. I love my occupation cause * because I see that it makes sense. It is The feeling that you can help someone is the most powerful and enjoyable one. feeling that you can help someone* "cause" is not a short form of "because". In fact, "cause" refers to a pecursor that starts a change which leads to an effect, while "because" is a connector to describe a reason for a situation.
Examples:
A highly processed diet (precursor) is the cause of obesity (effect).
She is morbidly obese (situation) because of her unhealthy diet (reason).
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About my job
I am an 18 years old student, so I can not have a full-time job. About a half year ago I decided to become a tutor, so now I help other students, who are studying in school. My major is in applied mathematics, because of it I can help my students with understanding to understand mathematical concepts. I think I do it well and I can see the result of my efforts: they improved their marks in school. I love my occupation, 'cause I see that it makes sense. It is the most powerful and enjoyable feeling when you can help someone.If you shorten "because" you should use an "apostrophe = ' " you can also spell it like 'cos , but these are not officially correct spellings, and are much more colloquial, so I wouldn't use them in a test! :)
Tutoring is a very rewarding experience :) keep up with the writing too! I notice that you have made a few errors with indefinite articles, so it would be a good idea for you to investigate how and when to use these to improve your speaking and writing.
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