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Mon Chienne
Ma famille, nous avon un chienne.Your dog seems to be male, so the masculine form of dog in French is 'chien'.
Il s’appelle Winston. Il a les cheveux courts et châtains. Il chante bon anniversaire avec nous.
Je marche avec il lui.
The correct translation for 'him' in French is 'lui' (the object of a sentence, in third person).
Il préfère le printemps et l’automne.
The second [e] in 'préfère' is an accent grave. The correct spelling for "spring" in French is "printemps".
Il n'aime ni le froid ni la chaleur.
I corrected this sentence to say "He does not like the cold, nor the heat" , but translated in French, it already implies cold and hot weather. When we talk about preferences in French, you have to add a 'le/la/les' article. Additionally, if you want to talk about 'neither/nor' in French, a grammatical structure you can use is "ne.. ni... ni..." .
Mon frère et Winston sautent sur le trampoline.
The first [e] in 'brother' has an accent grave, and 'sautent' is the correct third person present plural conjugation for 'jump' in French.
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Mon Ma Chienne,
Avec ma famille, nous avons une chienne. Il Elle s’appelle Winston. Il Elle a les cheveux poils courts et châtains. Il Elle chante bon anniversaire avec nous. Je marche avec il elle . Il Elle préfère le prentemps printemps et l’automne. Il ne ame Elle n'aime pas ni le froid ou ni le chaud météo. Mon frére et Winston sautent sur le trampoline.Want to progress faster?
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