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my opinion on the statement Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to raise children in a suburb than in the city I disagree with this statement and believe that raising children in the city is much better for two reasons: different opportunities and activities. First of all, big cities have a lot of opportunities for self-development, participation in the interesting events or competitions. For instance, in the capital of Ukraine annually is holding the tech hackathon for children in the age 10-15. It is a great chance for participants to show their talent, gain new experience and meet a lot of motivated people. Frequently children from suburban do not know about these kinds of events, mostly because their teachers and parents are not aware of its opportunities as well. Secondly, there are various activities for spending leisure time in the big city. For example, different game centers or entertainment spots with aquapark, quest rooms, skating, carting, and many others. Frankly, children from the small towns dream about all of these activities, whereas they cannot visit megapolises every weekend. For instance, when I was a child I always dreamed about the skate, but there was not even the proper store with skates in the small town where I lived. To summarize, children who grow up in the big cities are more aware of the different events, programs or competitions. Consequently, they can try a lot of different activities and choices that they like the most.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to raise children in a suburb than in the city I disagree with this statement and believe that raising children in the city is much better for two reasons: different opportunities and activities. First of all, big cities have a lot of opportunities for self-development, participation in the interesting events or competitions. For instance, in the capital of Ukraine annually is holding the tech hackathon for children in the age 10-15. It is a great chance for participants to show their talent, gain new experience and meet a lot of motivated people. Frequently children from suburban do not know about these kinds of events, mostly because their teachers and parents are not aware of its opportunities as well. Secondly, there are various activities for spending leisure time in the big city. For example, different game centers or entertainment spots with aquapark, quest rooms, skating, carting, and many others. Frankly, children from the small towns dream about all of these activities, whereas they cannot visit megapolises every weekend. For instance, when I was a child I always dreamed about the skate, but there was not even the proper store with skates in the small town where I lived. To summarize, children who grow up in the big cities are more aware of the different events, programs or competitions. Consequently, they can try a lot of different activities and choices that they like the most.

Hi, first of all i would like to share my opinion ,

I agree with you life in cities have a lot af advantage And many activities , growing up in the cites also good for education

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my opinion on the proposition

Do you agree or disagree with the following proposition?
It is better to raise children in the suburbs* than in the city.

I disagree with this p..n and believe that raising children in the city is much better for two reasons: different opportunities and activities.

First of all, big cities have many opportunities for self-development, participation in interesting events and competitions. For instance, in the capital of Ukraine, an annual tech hackathon for children aged 10-15 is held. It is a great chance for participants to show their talent, gain new experience and meet other enthusiasts. Frequently children from suburbia* do not know of these events, mostly because their teachers and parents are ignorant of them, too

Secondly, there are various leisure pursuits in the city. For example, different game centers or entertainment spots with aquapark, quest rooms, skating, carting, and many others. Frankly, children from the small towns dream about all these activities, but cannot visit megapolises every weekend. For instance, when I was a child I always dreamed about skating, but there was not even a proper store with skates in the small town where I lived.

To summarize, children who grow up in the big cities are more aware of the different events, programs or competitions. Consequently, they can try various activities and choose that which they prefer.

*I am not quite sure if "suburbia" (the part peripheral to the city) should be the right word in this debate. Perhaps they mean "the provences" (the part properly outside the city)?

very well written!

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