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Ryan Tsai
My favorite room (English writing please help me!) Everyone has their own spot to fulfill their inner peace of mind, so as me. When it comes to my favorite room, the first image that flashes into my mind is the bathroom. Me and my family live in the house located near an elongated river, which is called Tamsui river, and we often go to the riverside to listen the river flowing through. Therefore, it cultivated an addiction of mine listening to water flowing, and it causes me to indulge in the spot, bathroom. Bathroom is my favorite room of all time. It provides the most comfortable environment, since it washes away all the pressure I shoulder.

For example, when I’m taking a shower, listening to drifting sound of water often calms me down and gives me a brief time of thorough relief. Every time the drifting sound is like a mentor, giving instructions to solve the problems which happen at that day. Once me and my friend had a huge quarrel with my friends over an issue of not asking certain friends to go out. My friends were so furious and they couldn’t forgive for what we’ve done after so many times. After finishing my class, I went home directly and the first thing I did was to go to take a shower. At first, I couldn’t understand why they were so sensitive toward these things. I literally thought it was them being picky and tried to create issues. But, during the time water flowing through my body, I started to clear up my mind and I finally realized their feelings and my true thoughts. The loss of not being invited and involved is tremendously disappointing, since the group of our friends had gone through together a lot and we were so close. Had it not been for the clearing of myself, I wouldn’t have had a chance to compensate the precious friendships.

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My favorite room (English writing please help me!)

Everyone has their own spot to fulfill their inner peace of mind, so as me do I. When it comes to my favorite room, the first image that flashes into my mind is the bathroom. Me and my family My family and I live in the a house located near an elongated river, which is called Tamsui river. and We often go to the riverside to listen to the river flowing through. Therefore, it This cultivated an addiction of mine -listening to the sound of water flowing. and it causes me to I indulge in the spot this through the bathroom. The bathroom is my favorite room of all time. It provides the most comfortable environment, since it washes away all the pressure I shoulder.

For example, when I’m taking a shower, listening to the drifting sound of water often calms me down and gives me a brief time of thorough relief. Every time I hear the drifting sound it is like a mentor, giving instructions to solve the problems which happened at that day. Once me and my friend my friend and I had a huge quarrel with my friends over an issue of not asking certain friends to go out. My friends were so furious and they couldn’t forgive us for what we’ve we'd done after as the same thing has happened so many times. After finishing my class, I went home directly and the first thing I did was to go to take a shower. At first, I couldn’t understand why they were so sensitive toward these things. I literally thought it was them  they who were being picky and tried trying to create issues. But, during the time while the water flowed over flowing through my body, I started to clear up my mind and I finally realized their feelings and my true thoughts. The loss of not being invited and involved is tremendously disappointing, especially since the group of our friends had gone through together a lot  a lot together and we were so close. Had it not been for the clearing of myself, I wouldn’t have had a chance to compensate for the precious friendships.

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The sound of flowing water is very peaceful indeed! It is relaxing to listen to when studying or when I am trying to sleep!

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