A wonderful day
Today, I got up at 7 o’clock and it is the earliest day I got up.After I taking a shower ,My mom and I went to the KFC to have a breakfast.The biggest reason is my mom own the breakfast coupon would be expired after today.
Then we took a bus to go to the Hunan Province Museum.After taking 20 stops in bus,I felt a little sick when we arrived destination.We took part in the opening ceremony of YangFuyin ‘s painting and writing artworks. YangFuyin is good at Chinese ink painting and I observed that he likes creating fully meaning paintings by simple lines.
In the afternoon, I played the electric facilities with a big sister. We spent 120 coins to play different kind of electric facilities such as shooting the monsters on a sailing ship. The most simulated game is playing racing car.The seat that you sit will have the different degrees of shaking as your car’s turning.I got the number 2 in a 6 people ‘ racing,which made me very excited.What a wonderful day!
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A Wonderful Day [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]
Today, I got up at 7 o’clock and it is the first day I got up so/this early. After taking a* shower, my mom and I went to the KFC to have a breakfast. The biggest reason is my mom had a breakfast coupon that/which would be expired after today.Then we took a bus to go to the Hunan Province Museum. After taking 20 stops in the bus, I felt a little sick when we arrived at/to the destination.We took part in the opening ceremony of Yang Fuyin‘s painting and writing artworks. Yang Fuyin is good at Chinese ink painting and I observed that he likes creating fully meaningful paintings by simple lines.
In the afternoon, I played the arcade games with a big sister. We spent 120 coins to play different kinds of arcade games such as shooting the monsters on a sailing ship. The most simulated game is playing racing cars. The seat that you sit in will have different degrees of shaking as your car is turning. I got number 2 in a 6 person race, which made me very excited. What a wonderful day!
[* Or: "After I took a shower".
Remember that each comma should have a space after it. And each period should never have a space in front of it, but always one space after it unless it is the last sentence in a paragraph.]
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