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Animals Rights A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. -------------------------------------------------------------- Animals rights has become one of valuable discussion topics in the developed countries. Nowadays, many of civil society are interested in the animals rights and they have growing number of supporters. While many people argue that humans have the rights to exploit animals to satisfy their various needs. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of view and provide my support for the latter one. People who support the animal rights believe that the animals life should be respected. Therefore, humans have no moral right to kill them for food, or to use them for medical testing and research or to keep in zoos for entertainment and making money. In the first place, killing animals is not necessarily for food because balance diet is possible without eating meat. Secondly, the benefits of using animals in medical research do not justify the suffer caused. Finally, the zoos animals lose their freedom as long as they are put in artificial environment. However, other people have a solid reasons to proof their argument. First of all, it is necessarily for the humans to make testing for new drugs as well many important medical discoveries involved testing on animals. Furthermore, zoos allow scientists to study the animals and their behaviors. In addition to the fact that they are used for education and entertainment. Lastly, humans have the right to kill animal for food because the are below the humans in the food chain. To sum up, I support the animals rights to have a good treatment at farms, meat factories and zoos. I believe the humans have no alternative options to use them for their needs.

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Animals Rights

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
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Animals rights has become one of valuable discussion topics in the developed countries. Nowadays, many [people] in civil societies are interested in animals rights and they have a growing number of supporters, while many people argue that humans have the rights to exploit animals to satisfy their various needs.* In this essay, I will discuss both sides of view and provide my support for the latter one.

People who support animal rights believe that the animals' lives** should be respected. Therefore, humans have no moral right to kill them for food, or to use them for medical testing and research or to keep them in zoos for entertainment and making money. In the first place, killing animals is not necessarily for food because a balanced diet is*** possible without eating meat. Secondly, the benefits of using animals in medical research do not justify the suffering caused. Finally, the zoo animals lose their freedom as long as they are put in an artificial environment.

However, other people have solid reasons to prove their argument. First of all, it is necessary for humans to do testing on animals for new drugs as well as for many important medical discoveries. Furthermore, zoos allow scientists to study the animals and their behaviors, in addition to the fact that they are used for education and entertainment.****  Lastly, humans have the right to kill animals for food because the are below the humans in the food chain.

To sum up, I support the animals' rights to have a good treatment at farms, meat factories and zoos. I believe humans have no alternative options but to use them for their needs.

[ * Starting a sentence with "while" requires a response to the next phrase(s) later in the sentence. For example: While many people think this winter is colder than normal, others think it is not so unusual.

 ** Or: "that animal lives".

 *** Or: "because balanced diets are".

 **** Starting a sentence "In addition to the fact" requires a response phrase before the end of the sentence. Example: In addition to the fact that it is hot out, it is also very dry. Another way to rewrite your text keeping this as a separate sentence is: In addition, they are used for education and entertainment.]

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