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My Favorite Movie I love movies, there are so many good movies in the world, and I can't finish watching them all in my life, it's hard for me to choose a movie that I love most. Except horror movies, I never watch it. It scared me.

Today I want to talk about a movie Howl's moving castle .It actually changed my life.This is a very famous animated film, the director is みやざき はやお, we all love him, we all know the content of the story, but for practice, I will introduce it again.

It tells a story of a girl named Sophie who was magically turned into an old woman by a witch.But she can't tell anyone about the truth, she could only escape from her life and come to Howl's castle. This move affects the fate of everyone. All the suffering is worth it.In the end, everyone gets happiness. Sophie lives with Howl in the moving castle, just like the ending of every fairy tale, they are happy and hopeful.

When I was in junior high school, I watched it, and that was the first time I felt the charm of animation. It inspired me, since then, I want to be an animator. Now, I'm still on the way to being a great animator. I will never give up.

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I love movies. There are so many good movies in the world and but I can't finish watching them all in my life (OR, ... in this lifetime). It's hard for me to choose a movie that I love the most. Except horror movies, I never watch it.  I never watch horror movies. It scared scares me (I would suggest you to use the word "frightens" instead of "scares").

Today I want to talk about a movie called "Howl's Moving Castle" .It actually changed my life.This It is a very famous animated film, the director is directed by みやざき はやお (Miyazaki Hayao). We all love him. We all know the content of the story but for practice, I will introduce it again.

It tells a story of a girl named Sophie who was magically turned into an old woman by a witch.But but she can't couldn't tell anyone about the truth. She could only escape from her life and come to Howl's castle. This move affects the fate of everyone. All the suffering is worth it.In the end, everyone gets happiness. Sophie lives with Howl in the moving castle, just like the ending of every fairy tale, they are happy and hopeful.

When I was in junior high school, I watched it, and that was the first time I felt the charm of animation. It inspired me. Since then, I want to be an animator. (I would have written this sentence as , "Since then, I have always wanted to be an animator.) Now, I'm still on the way to being a great animator. I will never give up.

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Kindly do not use so many "," (commas). They are not required. Rather, end the sentences with a full-stop. Your lever of English is pretty high. Keep learning! 

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