Unhealthy meal
Hello, everybody!
How many times a week do you eat junk food? What do you prefer eating if you have little time?
Actually, it's a big problem for me. I cannot have any time for cooking during a week so I should think about my meal every time. When you live in such way you prefer a meal that doesn't take a lot of time. Unfortunately, such meal is rather unhealthy.
Every time when I eat this food I don't like myself. I think it can influence to an energy of a body and a work of a mind.
I realize I should cut down on fat and now I'm looking for an appropriate diet I can follow. It's not about strict restrictions, it's about right products at the right time.
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Hi Peter good work. You have a very formal way of writing. Maybe try practicing modal verbs and prepositions to polish your grammar. I rewrote a few phrases below.
Unhealthy meal
Hello, everybody!How many times a week do you eat junk food? What do you prefer to eat if you don't have much time?
Actually, it's a big problem for me. I don't have much time for cooking during the week so I need to think about my meals every time. When you live like this you prefer a meal that doesn't take a lot of time. Unfortunately, this kind of meal is rather unhealthy.Whenever I eat this kind of food I don't like myself. I think it can influence the energy of your body and mind.
I realize I should cut down on fat so now I'm looking for an appropriate diet I can follow. It's not about strict restrictions, it's about the right products at the right time.
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