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My life with music I love music.

I started listening to music when I was in elementary school.

At first, I listened some music which my mother and aunts were listening to.

And then, I started looking for some good music by myself on the Internet.

Then, I met a band, that was BUMP OF CHICKEN.

Their songs came into my heart smoothly and I felt as if these were songs for me.

After that, I listened to their musics and tried to find another artists, and started listening to many musics.

When I entered a high school, I wanted to enter light music club and visit it. The members were kind and they looked fun.

But then, I didn't have enough self confidence and felt they were too bright for me, and I couldn't join.

I spent all my high school life with listening to music every day.

After that, I entered university and remembered I had wanted to join a light music club. But then I gave up joining because I thought it was too late to start something new from uni, for some reason.

And I had been spending my life with listening to music same as high school.

However, my life changed.

One day of my third years of uni, I found a part time job offer of new CD shop.

I applied for it. That was popular CD shop and I thought it was too difficult to pass the job interview.

But fortunately and surprisingly I passed.

At first I was very anxious because I didn't have confidence yet.

After started working, I met many people, who was playing in a band, who was studying in uni, who was making some music events....

I was very moved and found we can do anything if we

really want to do.

I worked hard and these days were fullfilled.

I made music events, made my recommendation space, wrote many POP, talked with artists...

I got many things from the three years part time job.

Finally, I got little confidence.

And currently I work as a high school teacher, and surprisingly I'm in charge of a light music club.

My dream came true in an unexpected way!

And I always say to my students, " Do everything you want to do."

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My life with music

I love music.

I started listening to music when I was in elementary school.

At first, I listened to some music which my mother and aunts were listening to.

And then, I started looking for some good music by myself on the Internet.

Then, I met* a band called BUMP OF CHICKEN.

Their songs came into my heart smoothly and I felt as if these were songs for me.

After that, I listened to their music and tried to find other artists, and started listening to a lot of music.

When I entered a high school, I wanted to join the light music club and visit it. The members were kind and they looked fun.

But I didn't have enough self confidence and felt they were too bright for me, so I couldn't join.

I spent all my high school life with listening to music every day.

After that, I entered university and remembered I had wanted to join a light music club. But then I gave up joining because I thought it was too late to start something new from uni, for some reason.

And I had been spending my life with listening to the music same since high school.

However, my life changed.

One day of my third year of uni, I found a part time job offer for a new CD shop.

I applied for it. It was popular CD shop and I thought it was too difficult to pass the job interview.

But fortunately and surprisingly I passed.

At first I was very anxious because I didn't have confidence yet.

After started working, I met many people, some were playing in a band, some were studying in uni, some were making some music events....

I was very moved and found we can do anything if we really want to do.

I worked hard and those days were fulfilled.

I made music events, made my recommendation space, wrote many POPs, talked with artists...

I got many things from the three years at that part time job.

Finally, I got little confidence.

And currently I work as a high school teacher, and surprisingly I'm in charge of a light music club.

My dream came true in an unexpected way!

And I always say to my students, "Do everything you want to do."


*This is technically grammatically correct, but 'met' means you talked to them in person for the first time. I'm not sure if you did actually meet them, which is why I marked it down here. If you didn't, and just heard their music for the first time, then saying 'found' or 'discovered' would be better verbs.

"Then, I found a band called BUMP OF CHICKEN."

or

"Then, I discovered a band called BUMP OF CHICKEN."

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