August 31, 2018
Yesterday, my iPhone crushed all of a sudden. I was writing my diary on Notes at that time. When I charged the phone this morning, I found that all my stuffs in Notes are gone. I feel frustrated because I recorded a lot of my ideas on it, but they disappeared without trails.
I'm going to Beijing tomorrow! I can't believe it's tomorrow and feel so excited about it. Please recommend something interesting things in Beijing and delicious food courts! I can't wait to experience the mega city. I feel like a rural area girl finally making it to a metropolis.
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Hi Liz
Hereby the correction of your notebook entry. Well done!
Enjoy your trip to Beijing!
Regards
Karen
August 31, 2018
Yesterday, my iPhone crashed all of a sudden. I was writing my diary in Notes at that time. When I charged my phone this morning, I found out / noticed that all my stuff in Notes is gone. I feel / am frustrated because I recorded / wrote down a lot of my ideas in it, but they (just) disappeared without trails.I'm going to Beijing tomorrow! I can't believe it's tomorrow and I feel / am so excited about it. Please recommend interesting things (to see / to do) in Beijing and some delicious food courts! I can't wait to experience / to explore the mega city. I feel like a rural area girl (who's) finally making it to a metropolis.
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