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A few details about myself Hi. My name is Jack. I'm 19y.o. I'm from Belarus/Minsk. It's small country near Russia. I'm a student one of the oldest and biggest techical university in our republic. Now I go at 3 cours. I like music, and I play on guitar. In a future I want learn piano, but now I have not time and money for this, because I'm a student and live without parents help. I want visit all Europe countres and North America. And I looking friends in this countres across internet, but I can not. They doesn't answer me. It's sad. One day, when I spend time with my family, I heard beautiful song on radio. It's was in French. It's song is called "Je veux". The artist name Zaz. And in this moment I loved French. After that I was know, that there are cheap education in France, and I was desided enter in magistracy in France. I started watch video lessons of French on youtube. I founded programm "French for 16 hours" with Dmitriy Petrov. He is teacher and polyglot. He knows 30 languages. Besides French, he teaches English, Spanich, Itlian, German, Chinese,Portuguese and Hindi. It's great. If somebody became interested him https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCik7MxUtSXXfT-f_78cQRfQ/playlists?sort=dd&view=50&shelf_id=11 I think, that I write so much. See you later:)

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A few details about myself

Hi. My name is Jack. I'm 19y.o. I'm from Belarus/Minsk. It's small country near Russia. I'm a student of one of the oldest and biggest technical universities in our republic. Now I go at 3 cours.
I like music, and I play the guitar. In the future I want to learn to play the piano, but now I haven't got the time or money for this, because I'm a student and live without my parents help.
I want to visit all the European countries and North America. And I am looking for friends in these countries via the internet, but I can not. They doesn't answer me. It's sad.
One day, when I was spending time with my family, I heard a beautiful song on the radio. It was in French. The song is called "Je veux". The artist's name is Zaz. And in this moment I loved French. After that I knew, that there is cheap education in France, and I decided to enter in magistracy in France.
I started to watch video lessons of French on youtube. I found a programme called "French for 16 hours" with Dmitriy Petrov. He is a teacher and a polyglot. He knows 30 languages. Besides French, he teaches English, Spanish, Italian, German, Chinese, Portuguese and Hindi. It's great. If somebody became interested in him https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCik7MxUtSXXfT-f_78cQRfQ/playlists?sort=dd&view=50&shelf_id=11
I think, that I write so much. See you later:)

 Hey ! 

This is great! Just some little minor corrections or alterations to make things sound more natural. It might be worth reviewing a/an/the, articles, determiners, countable and uncountable nouns, and when to use to.

I am not sure what the part highlighted in green is supposed to say, sorry.

Here some little small pieces for you:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wdv59REiNZQ


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4U0uLBATZI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E3gvjrh5_TY

Hope this helps, have a good day! :)




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Hi. My name is Jack. I'm 19y.o. I'm from Belarus/Minsk. It's a small country near Russia. I'm a student of one of the oldest and biggest techical university in our republic. Now I am in the third course.
I like music, and I play on guitar. In a the future I want to learn to play piano, but now I do not have not time and money for this, because I'm a student and live without my parents help.
I want to visit all the Europe countres European countries and North America. And I am looking for friends in this these countres countries across the internet, but I can not. They doesn't answer me. It's sad.
One day, when I had spend time with my family, I heard a beautiful song on the radio. It's It was in French. It's The song is called "Je veux". The artist's name is Zaz. And in this moment I loved French. After that I was got to know, that there are is cheap education in France, and I was desided decided to enter in the magistracy in of France.
I started watching video lessons of French on youtube. I founded found a program "French for 16 hours" with Dmitriy Petrov. He is a teacher and polyglot. He knows 30 languages. Besides French, he teaches English, Spanich, Italian, German, Chinese,Portuguese and Hindi. It's great. If somebody became is interested  in him https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCik7MxUtSXXfT-f_78cQRfQ/playlists?sort=dd&view=50&shelf_id=11
I think, that I write quite a lot. See you later:)

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