PLEASE , CORRECT MY MISTAKES IN THIS STORY
When I was walking along the street I saw to Annie an old friend of college on bicycle, I have not seen her two years ago, but I remember that she told me that her father had given her a new car so I ask her about her new possession , and she told me that she took out a loan and she didn’t pay it off as soon as she could, because she was spending a lot of money and Now she has “ a rainy day “, for this reason she sold her car , now she only has a bicycle … it was difficult for her, however she is getting over it , she never give up .
The good news is that Annie is start again and she wants to change some bad habits and she hope to set aside money each month in a savings account and keep track of how much she spend each week.
On the other hand, she moved near to mi neighborhood so I will see her more times, and together go out to do exercises at the park or something like that.
She is my friend, a great girl, with a lot of problems but she always has a giant smile, good humor sense and good vibes .
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PLEASE , CORRECT MY MISTAKES IN THIS STORY
When I was walking along the street I saw to Annie, an old friend of from college on a bicycle. I have not seen her two years ago for two years, but I remember that she told me that her father had given her a new car. So I ask her about her new possession and she told me that she took out a loan and she didn’t pay it off as soon as she could should have, because she was spending a lot of money. and Now she has “ a rainy day “, for this reason she sold her car. Now she only has a bicycle. It was difficult for her, however she is getting over it. She never gives up .The good news is that Annie is starting again and she wants to change some bad habits. and She hopes to set aside money each month in a savings account and keep track of how much she spends each week.
On the other hand, she moved near to mi my neighborhood so I will see her more times often. and We plan together to go out to do exercises at in the a park or something like that.
She is my friend, a great girl, with a lot of problems but she always has a giant smile, good sense of humor sense and good vibes .
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