SKILLS/HABILITIES
My name is Adelinda Numpaque, i am 17 years old, i from colombia, i can eat fast in the breakfast inter week, i can laugh during much time, i can speak fast without stop, i can walk fast as an athlete,i can play soccer, basketball, i can study more of ten hours, i can read during twenty hours, i can go to gym, i can sing in spanish, i can be a leader of my friends and companions, i can dance salsa, bachata, regaeton, merengue, i cannot speak large amount of languages, i cannot bend my body, be flexible, i cannot eat bicycles, i cannot be awake during 43 .
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Hello Adelinda! I did not highlight capitalizing "I". The word "I" is always capitalized. Most of your statements should be separate sentences, and I did not highlight correcting that, either.
SKILLS/HABILITIES
My name is Adelinda Numpaque, and i am 17 years old.
I am from Colombia. I can eat breakfast fast in the breakfast inter week[I don't know what you mean by "inter week". Once a week? During the week? On weekends?]. I can laugh during much for a long time. I can speak fast without stopping. I can walk as fast as an athlete. I can play soccer and basketball. I can study more ofthan ten hours. I can read duringfor twenty hours. I can go to the gym. I can sing in Spanish. I can be a leader of my friends and companions. I can dance salsa, bachata, reggaeton, and merengue. I cannot speak a large amountnumber of languages. I cannot bend my body or be flexible. I cannot eat bicycles.[Please do not try!] I cannot be awake during 43.[Is 43 a TV show?]
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