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My feelings and reflections It is the second time for me to come to the Tate Modern. Whenever I come here, I feel silences in Art. The passionate, angry, hopeful, chaos...they could be helpful for our next project to navigate London based on time and tube in terms of a medium we use for a presentation. The following photos are my impressive artworks yesterday.

My feelings and reflections are in a dark recently. I hope to get out of this dark room soon.

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My feelings and reflections

It is the second time for me to I have come to the Tate Modern. Whenever I come here, I feel the silences within Art. The passionate, angry, hopeful, and chaos [this sounds like the opposite of silence - is this a different idea, or a continuation of the idea in the previous sentence? If it is a different idea, you should use a phrase to connect these two contrasting ideas "But I also feel...""Along with silence, there is also..."]...thesey could be helpful for our [who is "we"? The first time you introduce a subject, you must be clear about who/what it is. The second, third time you mention the same subject you can use pronouns like "it" "they" "we" etc.] next project to navigatinge London based on using time and the tube in terms of as a medium we use for a presentation. The following photos are my impressive of artworks that impressed me yesterday.

My feelings and reflections are in a have been dark recently. I hope to get out of this dark room soon.

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My feelings and reflections

It is my second visit to the Tate Modern. Whenever I come here, I feel silence in Art. The passionate, angry, hopeful, chaos...they could be helpful for our next project to navigate London based on time and tube in terms of a medium we use for a presentation. The following photos are my impressionistic pieces from yesterday.

My feelings and reflections are in the dark recently. I hope to get out of this dark room soon.

Very well written!

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Dark places are so good for sleeping :) one time , in same place , i closed my eyes and slept until the end of lecture. :))
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I am curious, Nami. Is this what you are saying? I have come to the Tate Modern for the second time. Whenever I come here, I feel silences in Art. In between the silences - the passionate, the angry, the hopeful, the chaotic...these could be helpful for our next project - navigating London based on passage through time and tube using some form of presentation media. The following are photos of artworks I made. They are the result of my impressions from my visit to Tate Modern yesterday. Recently, my feelings and reflections have been in a place of darkness. I hope to get out of this dark room soon. When you say that you feel silences in Art, do you mean instead that you feel silences as absences of noise and distraction that are otherwise omnipresent in our modern, socially networked society? Silences in Art that consist of others' perceptions of "the passionate, the angry, the hopeful, the chaotic" - communicated to us in silence and appreciated by us in silence?

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