My future plan for living
Few days ago I decided to start a new business. I had worked for a swimming club before I decided to make my own business. I was registered as an unemployed, then I had to submitted an applicacion.If the city hall accept my application, the guvernment will be supporting my business! I am looking forward to hear about my application. When I get some news, I will write again.
Thanks for reading. Have a nice day
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My Future Plan for Living [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]
A few days ago I decided to start a new business. I had worked for a swimming club before I decided to make my own business. I was registered as an unemployed man/person,* then I had to submit an application. If the City Hall accepts my application, the government will be supporting my business! I am looking forward to hearing about my application. When I get some news, I will write again.Thanks for reading. Have a nice day.
[* Or: "I was registered as unemployed, then ..."]
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