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My Dad is my hero I love my dad, I love mom too, but for this moment I'm gonna write about him. I love my dad more than everything in this world. He's my real hero. He never angry and complained to me. He trusts me that I can responsible with my own self. We rarely to talk when he worked because he spent most of his time to find money for us. I always met him in the evening after his finish his work. We just have fifteen minutes to talk because he should sleep. Daddy doesn't talk a lot like mom, but I know that deep inside his heart he really cares with us. I live far away from parents because of my job. Since I live in another city my dad always call me even it's not every day but he always makes it sure that I'm fine. These days my dad is busy with his new activity. that is taking care of my niece and nephew. My dad has been retired from his work since 2010. When their parents go to work my dad babysit them alone because my mom still work. So, my niece and nephew will go to their home after their parents finish their job. My dad is taking care of us. Even he so easily gets offended, I still love him so much because he's the angel of my heart

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My Dad is My Hero    [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

I love my dad, I love mom too, but for this moment I'm going to write about him.

I love my dad more than everything in this world. He's my real hero. He is never angry or complains to me. He trusts me so that I can be responsible with my own self. We rarely talked when he worked because he spent most of his time to find money for us. I always met him in the evening after he finished his work. We would just have fifteen minutes to talk because he needed to sleep. Daddy doesn't talk a lot like mom, but I know that deep inside his heart he really cares about us.

I live far away from parents because of my job. Since I live in another city, my dad always calls me, it's not every day but he always makes sure that I'm fine.

These days my dad is busy with his new activity that is taking care of my niece and nephew. My dad has been retired from his work since 2010. When their parents go to work my dad babysits them alone because my mom still works. So, my niece and nephew go back to their home after their parents finish their job.

My dad is taking care of us. Even though he so easily gets offended, I still love him so much because he's the angel of my heart.

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