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I went to the market. I went to my friend's home few days ago. After visiting her , we went to the market. I bought some clothes for my mother, and sisiter-in-law. My friend asked me, that she want to eat pizza. We went to the pizza hut.It was full of people and no table was vacant. However we got a table after few minutes. We ordered the pizza. While we were waiting for food to be served. I saw a couple arguing from the window outside. It looked like the wife was angry with her husband. Her husband was saying sorry to her. After a little bit argument the wife said him,"okay, don't do this again, and hugged him".I just understood this from her gesture, as they were far away and I couldn't hear them. At once my friend whispered in my ears, they are going to home. When I looked at her she was eating pizza. :-)

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I went to my friend's home few days ago. After visiting her , we went to the market. I bought some clothes for my mother, and sisiter-in-law. sister-in-law
My friend asked told me, that she want wanted to eat pizza. We went to the pizza hut.It was full of people and no table was tables were vacant. However, we got a table after a few minutes. We ordered the pizza. While we were waiting for the food to be served., I saw a couple arguing from the window outside (I saw a couple arguing outside through the window). It looked like the wife was angry with her husband. Her husband was saying sorry to her. After a little bit argument, the wife said told him,": "Okay, don't do this again," and hugged him".I just understood this from her gesture, as they were far away and I couldn't hear them. At once At the same time, my friend whispered in my ears,: "They are going to home." When I looked at her she was eating pizza. :-)
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I went to the market.

I went to my friend's house few days ago. After visiting her , we went to the market. I bought some clothes for my mother and sister-in-law.
My friend asked if we could go and eat pizza. We went to the pizza hut.It was full of people and no table was vacant. However we got a table after few minutes. We ordered the pizza. While we were waiting for food to be served, I saw a couple arguing from the window outside. It looked like the wife was angry with her husband. Her husband was saying sorry to her. After a while the wife said to him,"okay, don't do this again", and hugged him.I  just understood this from her gesture, as they were far away and I couldn't hear them. At once my friend whispered in my ears, they are going to home. When I looked at her she was eating pizza. :-)


This is really well written, good work!

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