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Their idea is creating a cinematic video ad to stir the target audience on the social network such as Facebook, Youtube,
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Their idea is to createing a cinematic video ad to stir the target audience on the social networks such as Facebook, and Youtube.Comment - you can use your original phrase of 'creating a...' but it reads more cleanly if you change it proper verb phrase. As for social networks, I believe the commonly agreed to terminology is to refer to each of the social networks (Twitter, FB, YT, etc.) as a network. So, if you are addressing more than one, you need to use the plural form "networks". Lastly, when providing a list of only 2 items, you use a conjunction (like "and") rather than a comma to join the items.
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