My all family members are sleeping.
It's thirty passed one o' clock by watch. All family members are sleeping, I alone is wakeup. I'm busy studying. I usually study late night. I have done my today's task.
I want to enjoy the fresh cool wind blowing outside. As it is dark outside so I can't go out. Sometimes I think how lovely the night would be , when I will sit with my husband in the lawn of your house, and enjoy a cup of tea or coffee with him. It's utopia, I wish it will happen soon.
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My all All my family members are sleeping.
It's thirty half passed one o' clock by watch. All family members are sleeping, I alone am awake. is wakeup. I'm busy studying. I usually study late night. I have done my task for the day. today's task.I want to enjoy the fresh cool wind blowing outside. As it is dark outside so I can't go out. Sometimes I think how lovely the night would be, when I will sit with my husband in the lawn of your house, on the porch of our house, and enjoy a cup of tea or coffee with him. It's utopia, but I hope wish it will happen soon.
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All of my family members are sleeping.
It's half past one. All of my family members are sleeping, I alone am awake. I'm busy studying. I usually study late night. I have done my tasks for today.I want to enjoy the fresh, cool wind blowing outside, however it is dark outside so I can't go out. Sometimes I think how lovely the night will be , when I will sit with my husband in the lawn of our house, and enjoy a cup of tea or coffee with him. It will be perfect, I hope it will happen soon.
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- British English = Half past one
American English = One thirty (I think...)
- "Utopia" is quite a tricky word in English. Your weren't so wrong to use it there but there are lots of uses of that word in political philosophy and sociology that means you should probably avoid it until you have seen it those contexts.
- Not a correction but I just wanted to say that I really liked your sentence starting "Sometimes I think" - there is something poetic about your word order and it's also a really nice image.
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